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A Mother's Defense by *AlfaFilly:iconAlfaFilly:


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Submitted: January 16, 2008
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"My son may not be like me or the rest of us, but he is my son. There isn't a day or night where I would let him fall victim to a person as heartless as you. I'll give you this first and final warning; don't ever lay another hand on my son or it will be the worst action you'll ever take." ~Nelthilta from Calestine Princess Novel

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Good Lord this took forever. But it was completely worth it.

I've had this sketch done for who knows how long. Several months I do believe. It took me around 3 1/2 days and between 40-50 layers. A relatively simple piece, yes, but very effective in my opinion.

Before anyone spats out saying "OMG that BG is soooo ugly and liek totally doesn't fit!" You must know the scene was taken in in an Ambivian Mall. I could have made it look totally wicked sweet in some way but that's just not how my artwork goes. I work with metaphorical, straight forward stuff. Nothing classy and fancy.

Story information (may skip):
As far as the scene in particular goes, this was soon after Nelthilta and Garin (who is currently 2 weeks old -remember he ages quickly) finally made it to civilization after Nelthilta was forced to retreat elsewhere in order to protect her son from being killed by the Royals after her unwanted pregnancy (via magical spell plz). She must hide Garin on account that he's half Lanian. The Ambivians are currently in war with the race and thus people don't much favor them in the least bit.

Normally living in isolation with only an elderly Ambivian female knowing of their existence, they were forced to venture to a local, run down town mall when the lady becomes ill and is in need of their assistance in keeping her well. Nelthilta tried to conceal Garin in her backpack while trying to find the needed items only to have him escape when a lightning storm knocks the power out and startles him.

Soon enough, Vennek, one of Nelthilta recent pre-mates (boyfriend) and his gang (readers of the fan fic version may know them) show up and stumble across the poor helpless pup. Nelthilta, stealing a police uniform, catches up to them and gives them the fight of their life. She manages to get back to her backpack and get a hold of her gun. Eventually escaping from the mall and going back to their solitude.
Story Information End

When it comes to just who she shot, I'm not gonna reveal that just yet cause I know it taunts you. >X3

Before anyone points out both the gun and it's "blast" I DID reference the pistol with one of my dad's/mine to get accuracy (though I might have added in a couple things by mistake) and the blast is supposed to be like that. Ambivian Royal pistols shoot twice as powerful and tend to spark like that of a small cannon. Why? Because the typical Ambivian is anywhere from 6 to 8 feet tall so everything else is obviously larger in comparison to ours. So... our pistols are about... 6 inches in length while theirs are nearly a foot. So more power can fit within the barrels.

Well, I'm done here I suppose. If you have any questions on the image, storyline, or anything else, feel free to ask and stuffs. <8P Red-lining and anatomy help is much appreciated!

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I'm unsure how this will appear on light monitored computers.

Did you hear about the rat's skull they found the size of a car?! <8O OH MY GEE!
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AUGH

*twitch* FILLEH!

YOU NEARLY GAVE ME A HEART ATTACK!

This is absolutely amazing,I adore the background,I think it's very suiting for the pic,anyways,it's not the background you wanna look at.First off,Garin is so CUTEEEEE!He looks so helpless and tiny clinging to her,Ne;thila's tail wrapped around his is an adorable touch.You simply amaze me with your clothing folds,clothing folds are one of thethings I'm struggling with and how you did all those just wows me. I adore how much detail you put into the hair,tails,and thingeys hanging from Garin's ears!I wanna touch them...The only critique I have on this is that little bunnyish tail thing on Nethilita..I'm not quite sure if it's a tail or not..

:poke: Overall FANTASTIC.

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Oh wow! :jawdrop: A mother's love is very powerful, I must say. And this is one perfect example of just that! I like the plotline here, and the scene is so awesome! :D TERIFFICLY DONE! :w00t:

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Wow, I love how you drew Nelthilta's outfit, it's really well shaded, and the folds are really well placed. The expressions are great, and I personaly like the background.
The only thing I could say is that she's holding the gun a bit strangely for the position she's in, but I can't really tell how. It just looks a bit awqward I guess XD

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Wow, this is great! I love the folds, and your shading is amazing. I love both the expressions, but especially Nelthy's. And personally, I think the background fits just right.

And having just read the bottom of Rokii's post since it's right at the top of my screen right now, I'd have to say I agree that the gun hand somehow looks a bit awkward. Maybe part of it is that she's got an extra finger... unless Ambivians have a different structure and I just wasn't aware... in that case, I have no clue what it might be.

But this is really great! I love it! :+favlove:

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Holy cow! I DID put an extra finger on her! XD I gotta fix that! :lmao: Thanks for pointing that out! I never would have noticed!

I think it looks like her arm is too short from my perspective. The part from elbow to shoulder. I was unable to fix it in photoshop because i had to alter the sketch cause the gun and arm were originally pointed slightly down which distorted it D8>

Thank you again! <3

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XD I was wondering about that...

Ahh, that would make sense.

Not a problem! <3

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DUDE FILLY! D8> This is rockin'! 8D The shading and highlighting looks... REAL! Even with lines, still... REAL! XD
Awww look at lil' Gar *talks baby talk* Yesh he is he's such a cute wittle mushywushycvcvxpcubvdoibidofc XDDDD
And the texture on their tails is like, FANTASMICLYNESSES! Great job da Feelly X3 *gives you a cookie*

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Oooo You captured so much emotion in this 80! And the little one looks so cute <;)

Great job!

And If you ever want to give me lessons on drawing guns, I'm open xD I suck at weapons. You PWN them tho cB

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Oh my goodness, this is amazing! *o* The coloring, the lineart, the detail! WOW!!! The clothes came out perfect and natural! And there is so much powerful emotion that I have to just look at it for a long time.
Poor Garin, he look so scared! <8[ I want to comfort him!
The story is also very interesting. How does Nelthy, a princess, get into these situations?

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Cute Garin o-o :heart:

I love the shading you put on Nelthilta's teeth.

Wicked cool Filleh :D

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