The Selection - Ch2 page 9

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_{One day late but SSSSSH
Which is ironic because I was actually ahead of schedule until this weekend pff}

More silent pages because I can't help myself! It felt weird not putting in text on this page. I tried to sorta convey a similar set of events as this page. Just idle tasks in awkward loneliness. Alas and forsooth!

Someone is calling, Kaikai. You should check that.

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Favorite panel: 1 (I hated it at first, now I actually like it. Whoah.)
Least Favorite panel: 3

Personal Crits (ones I'd prefer you not mention):
-Perspectives as usual (do I need to keep saying it?) Lazy Limo in panel 1. Um. Proportions. Cause. Huh.
Technically I don't want crits on a lot of this stuff cause I know it's not perfected. But I feel bad saying not to cause I still would like suggestions for future pages. :0 Maybe just be aware I don't plan on fixing existing pages but I'll consider stuff for the next ones!


Constructive Criticism and spelling/grammatical help is WELCOMED!

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