The Selection - page 24

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STOP!
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GARIN TIME!
*break dance*

Hey, I never said it was Feddy time! That was your own fault for assuming that. lawl

Garin no speak gooded.

For those of you who are new to Garin, YES, his eyes look different. His right eye is a Lanian eye (red and seemingly pupil-less with those funky highlights) and his left eye is an Ambivian eye (with obvious pupil and iris).
As well, the hair on his neck is very stiff, which is why those lights are able to.. be... there.
I can't wait for my Biology course next year so I can finally see if any of this crap is physically possible. lol

HAAAAIIIR TOOOUUUCCCHH
I actually need some advice on that last panel. Do you think it would imply better that he's brushing her hair aside with that "*BRUSH*" text or without it? Or if there's some other word to replace it? I was unsure.

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Favorite panel: 1 (haawwt lol j/k)
Least Favorite panel: 4

Personal Crits (ones I'd prefer you not mention):
-Umm... Garin's... face. Cause I'm still unsure of his snout's shape and all that since I haven't drawn him in awhile (I know, it's sad).

Constructive Criticism, pointing out flaws, and spelling/grammatical help is DEFINITELY helpful!

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