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Haha, this is probably one of my favorite pages for some odd reason. I can't say why. I just really love how the whole thing came together so cleanly.

The first of many punches to come!
KAILANI PUNCH.

I'm trying to make Kailani look a little less anorexic like most Ambivians seem to be. Especially since she has Lanian in her. I don't want her to be fat or chubby or anything, just big-ish boned. But not too much so cause I still want her to have a curvy look.
lol I dunno I'm just experimenting.

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Favorite panel: 8/last
Least Favorite panel: 6 _{(I reffed with a pic of myself but it still looks weird)}

Personal Crits (ones I'd prefer you not mention):
_{-The one-take look of panels 3,4,7 & 8. Cause I made it that on purpose. That's always how I imaged the scene in my head. C:}

Constructive Criticism, pointing out flaws, and spelling/grammatical help is DEFINITELY helpful!

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