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The Selection - page 38 by AlfaFilly The Selection - page 38 by AlfaFilly
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WARNING: This looks better on slightly dark monitored computers.

Gosh, Feddy, least you could do is say something.
Or, ya know. Smile.

Experimented a tad with shading. Trying to see if the shading effects the mood differently, of which I believe it does in a sense. Not sure yet if I want to keep the next pages like this or change it back. If I do change it I'll probably change the shading on everything in pages prior where it's dark (33-37). Before I do that, though I want to ask you guys opinion.

Yes? No?


Oh yeah, and Feddy doesn't have his rings anymore. At least not in this chapter. ;P

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:bulletpurple: Favorite panel: 2
:bulletpurple: Least Favorite panel: 1

:bulletred:Personal Crits (ones I'd prefer you not mention):
-Um. Inconsistency in Feddy's fingers. I noticed they get thicker or... something. Will most likely alter.

-Also... panels 3-4. Didn't quiiite come out how I intended. *AlphaShampoo-Artemis said it looked like Kailani was staring at his biceps PFFF

Constructive Criticism, pointing out flaws, and spelling/grammatical help is DEFINITELY helpful!

Copyright © C. "Filly" Boone, AlfaFilly
Do not alter or distribute without permission.
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:iconrelilah:
Relilah Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This needs to be made into a movie. It just... sings
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AlfaFilly Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh gosh a movie! But what kind of movie? 2D animation? Computer Animation? Ruin everything entirely and use a human cast? The semi-endless possibilities! :ohnoes:
Also a musical. Can you imagine that? Oh my gosh.
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Relilah Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A MOVIE. Hmm, whatever sort would best utilize your art style. No human cast. Eugh, who wants to see one of those anymore? XD
2D would be the best, methinks. 3D would be sort of... weird. 
Haha, Fred's voice? Kai's? I want to hear it! I would DEFINITELY pay for that! For some reason, Phantom of the Opera comes to mind; though he's not a monster in any sense--I mean, right now, I don't think he is. He's highly intelligent, and compassionate. I'll just shush and go into some corner like a good girl.  
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corvusraven Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Student Filmographer
I love how you drew his hand
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AlfaFilly Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Gotta love those hands and their funky fingers :D
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Terrajaide Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012
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I really like the... errr, hand progression?
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AlfaFilly Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha thanks! xD
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Terrajaide Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012
Lol, np. :meow:
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PandoraAlice Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012
Holy cupcake that's some long finger(nail?)s! i love the shading ;)
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AlfaFilly Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha, yeah his fingers are extra long 8D
Thank you! C:
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