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WARNING: This looks better on slightly dark monitored computers.

Gosh, Feddy, least you could do is say something.
Or, ya know. Smile.

Experimented a tad with shading. Trying to see if the shading effects the mood differently, of which I believe it does in a sense. Not sure yet if I want to keep the next pages like this or change it back. If I do change it I'll probably change the shading on everything in pages prior where it's dark (33-37). Before I do that, though I want to ask you guys opinion.

Yes? No?


Oh yeah, and Feddy doesn't have his rings anymore. At least not in this chapter. ;P

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:bulletpurple: Favorite panel: 2
:bulletpurple: Least Favorite panel: 1

:bulletred:Personal Crits (ones I'd prefer you not mention):
-Um. Inconsistency in Feddy's fingers. I noticed they get thicker or... something. Will most likely alter.

-Also... panels 3-4. Didn't quiiite come out how I intended. *AlphaShampoo-Artemis said it looked like Kailani was staring at his biceps PFFF

Constructive Criticism, pointing out flaws, and spelling/grammatical help is DEFINITELY helpful!

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:iconwishinguponyourself:
WishingUponYourself Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015  Student Interface Designer
Freddy is so damn hawt! I like the way he is so formal :3
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:iconalfafilly:
AlfaFilly Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Teehee he tries his best :D
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:iconrelilah:
Relilah Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This needs to be made into a movie. It just... sings
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:iconalfafilly:
AlfaFilly Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Oh gosh a movie! But what kind of movie? 2D animation? Computer Animation? Ruin everything entirely and use a human cast? The semi-endless possibilities! :ohnoes:
Also a musical. Can you imagine that? Oh my gosh.
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Relilah Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A MOVIE. Hmm, whatever sort would best utilize your art style. No human cast. Eugh, who wants to see one of those anymore? XD
2D would be the best, methinks. 3D would be sort of... weird. 
Haha, Fred's voice? Kai's? I want to hear it! I would DEFINITELY pay for that! For some reason, Phantom of the Opera comes to mind; though he's not a monster in any sense--I mean, right now, I don't think he is. He's highly intelligent, and compassionate. I'll just shush and go into some corner like a good girl.  
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CorvusRaven Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Professional Filmographer
I love how you drew his hand
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:iconalfafilly:
AlfaFilly Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Gotta love those hands and their funky fingers :D
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:iconterrajaide:
Terrajaide Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012
:iconilavplz:
I really like the... errr, hand progression?
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:iconalfafilly:
AlfaFilly Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
haha thanks! xD
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:iconterrajaide:
Terrajaide Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012
Lol, np. :meow:
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PandoraAlice Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012
Holy cupcake that's some long finger(nail?)s! i love the shading ;)
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:iconalfafilly:
AlfaFilly Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Haha, yeah his fingers are extra long 8D
Thank you! C:
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strong789 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2011
I really like the last three panels. Especially the last one. it's really nice!
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:iconalfafilly:
AlfaFilly Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Thanks!
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Earthpatriot117 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2010
for some reason, I got Beauty and the Beast De-ja vew. I kinda see it with them. by the way the lord looks, NICEEE!
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Falcolf Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2010  Professional Filmographer
Gosh, I likee the shading on this page, it looks great, especially with the moment. Also, nice hand gestures on Feddy's part, though damnit Feddy, at least say 'Hi!' instead of just the creepy hand thing. :XD:
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:iconalfafilly:
AlfaFilly Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Federico must feel awkward towards the ladies. :XD:
Then again if you just met your now-wife after 15 years I'm sure you'd be lost for words too haha! :lmao:
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Falcolf Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2010  Professional Filmographer
lol yeah poor guy :XD: I also never really got the impression that he was very much of an extrovert, so maybe that's part of it? ('course I just met him, so you tell me :XD:)
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charla316 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010
wow the next page must more awsome if its taking this long to do ^^ hey keep the greatness up
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:iconalfafilly:
AlfaFilly Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010  Student Digital Artist
I'm hoping so :'D
Thanks!
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Ayemae Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2010   General Artist
Awesome page, I really like the shading style. =D The page definitely looks like it has more dimension now. ^^

I really love the last three panels. The action reads very well to me. =) Very cinematic.

I only have one, very short crit this time. :XD: If you're going to use more atmospheric shading like this, I think you could really benefit from shading with a color other than black when possible, since black kind of deadens the picture... I'd suggest using dark blue or purple depending on the situation, and only use black if you need to shade something that's already really, really dark. =)

Great job, can't wait for the next page! (Hahaha I got this to you before you submitted it this time. >:] )
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AlfaFilly Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Ah, not a bad idea :D
Yeah, I attempted dark blue shading on pager... er... 35? But when I went over dark colors it looked horrid cause the blue was brighter than the color so it looked more like a highlight than shading. I was like "What's the deal? D:< " so, yeah, coloring over just those parts with black instead actually... makes sense now. Wow. :XD:
I think I'll try it out on this next page and see how it looks. =P

Thank you muchly! (GASP! Darn we had a pattern going! :shakefish: haha!)
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starteller794 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
i loved this comic!! Can't wait to see more!! I really like the way their society works, its so creative!!
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:iconalfafilly:
AlfaFilly Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! :]
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:iconcharla316:
charla316 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2010
missing week!
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:iconcharla316:
charla316 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2010
srry to anoy you this week has been skipped

look a dot!
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:iconanimewolf13:
AnimeWolf13 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2010  Student Digital Artist
i love how he puts his hand out
knowing his more conservitive personality it rely shows he acctually cares about her!

srry im commenting sooo much...there is just sooo much to say!
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:iconalfafilly:
AlfaFilly Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Aww, haha indeed! Very much so.
Thanks!

It's no problem! 8D
The more the merrier!
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AnimeWolf13 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2010  Student Digital Artist
ur sooo nice...i8 hope someday u animate the comic! iv seen ur holiday epicness on youtube and i loved it!
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:iconanimewolf13:
AnimeWolf13 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2010  Student Digital Artist
i love this comic
its the perfect mix between fanticy and romance!!!!!!!!
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:iconalfafilly:
AlfaFilly Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Glad you think so!
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AnimeWolf13 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2010  Student Digital Artist
^^
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AnimeWolf13 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2010  Student Digital Artist
plzzzzzzzz!!! make da next one quick!!!!!!
Y... Y AT THE MOST EPIC PART?!
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:iconalfafilly:
AlfaFilly Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Cause that's just how it works! xD
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AnimeWolf13 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2010  Student Digital Artist
ya my friend was over when i showed this to her and she loves it!!!!!!
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spacewolfomega Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2010
Very dramatic and some excellent shading! :clap:

So, our hapless heroine ends up with the creepy, powerful guy? Hmmm... verrrry eenteresting... I wish to learn more!
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:iconalfafilly:
AlfaFilly Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! 8D
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:iconaustintrench:
austintrench Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
Aw I hope dey make kids
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:iconalfafilly:
AlfaFilly Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Haha, they just met, I doubt they'll be makin' babies any time soon. :XD:
Or... will they? :paranoid:
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austintrench Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
if det ever ave kids do u think theyll be sold off just like her?
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:iconalfafilly:
AlfaFilly Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010  Student Digital Artist
No. The Selection process only happened once. It'll never happen again. :)
And I doubt they'll have the ability to have kids. Kailani is like a mule. She's infertile. And the chances of cross-breeding a cross-breed usually ends in... nothing. xD You can mate a donkey and a horse and get a mule, but you can't mate a mule with a mule and get more mules. Because mules are automatically born infertile.
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:iconayemae:
Ayemae Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2010   General Artist
...but... aren't Garin and Zamora...?

:confused:
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:iconalfafilly:
AlfaFilly Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2010  Student Digital Artist
What about them? :o
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:iconayemae:
Ayemae Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2010   General Artist
Well, the infertile hybrid thing, and Garin and Zamora seemed like they're prooobably the parents of a certain someone... Ooor my theory has been fork'd. :'C At least... for now. 8D
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:iconalfafilly:
AlfaFilly Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Oh silly, whoever said that?
Then again... who said it wasn't true?
OooOoooOoooh! >:D
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:iconcharla316:
charla316 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010
where you get that idea no baby mules never mind
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:iconalfafilly:
AlfaFilly Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Because mules... can't mate with mules.. and make mules. You didn't know that? O.O
But also because I just like it like that. So... yeah. :]
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:iconcharla316:
charla316 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2010
just because i watch animal planet doesnt mean know about mules
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:iconalfafilly:
AlfaFilly Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2010  Student Digital Artist
lol quite right. xD
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:iconaustintrench:
austintrench Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
well they arent any of those things, itll spice up the comic trustme
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