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Gosh, Feddy, least you could do is say something.
Or, ya know. Smile.
Experimented a tad with shading. Trying to see if the shading effects the mood differently, of which I believe it does in a sense. Not sure yet if I want to keep the next pages like this or change it back. If I do change it I'll probably change the shading on everything in pages prior where it's dark (33-37). Before I do that, though I want to ask you guys opinion.
Yes? No?
Oh yeah, and Feddy doesn't have his rings anymore. At least not in this chapter.
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Favorite panel: 2
Least Favorite panel: 1
Personal Crits (ones I'd prefer you not mention):
-Um. Inconsistency in Feddy's fingers. I noticed they get thicker or... something. Will most likely alter.
-Also... panels 3-4. Didn't quiiite come out how I intended. AlfaShampoo-Artemis said it looked like Kailani was staring at his biceps PFFF
Constructive Criticism, pointing out flaws, and spelling/grammatical help is DEFINITELY helpful!
Copyright © C. "Filly" Boone, AlfaFilly
Do not alter or distribute without permission.
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First page: alfafilly.deviantart.com/art/T…
Gosh, Feddy, least you could do is say something.
Or, ya know. Smile.
Experimented a tad with shading. Trying to see if the shading effects the mood differently, of which I believe it does in a sense. Not sure yet if I want to keep the next pages like this or change it back. If I do change it I'll probably change the shading on everything in pages prior where it's dark (33-37). Before I do that, though I want to ask you guys opinion.
Yes? No?
Oh yeah, and Feddy doesn't have his rings anymore. At least not in this chapter.
---
Favorite panel: 2
Least Favorite panel: 1
Personal Crits (ones I'd prefer you not mention):
-Um. Inconsistency in Feddy's fingers. I noticed they get thicker or... something. Will most likely alter.
-Also... panels 3-4. Didn't quiiite come out how I intended. AlfaShampoo-Artemis said it looked like Kailani was staring at his biceps PFFF
Constructive Criticism, pointing out flaws, and spelling/grammatical help is DEFINITELY helpful!
Copyright © C. "Filly" Boone, AlfaFilly
Do not alter or distribute without permission.
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Oh dear god 🌟. Is she going to be ok now she meet her mate 🌸?