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Gosh, Feddy, least you could do is say something.
Or, ya know. Smile.

Experimented a tad with shading. Trying to see if the shading effects the mood differently, of which I believe it does in a sense. Not sure yet if I want to keep the next pages like this or change it back. If I do change it I'll probably change the shading on everything in pages prior where it's dark (33-37). Before I do that, though I want to ask you guys opinion.

Yes? No?


Oh yeah, and Feddy doesn't have his rings anymore. At least not in this chapter. ;P

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:bulletpurple: Favorite panel: 2
:bulletpurple: Least Favorite panel: 1

:bulletred:Personal Crits (ones I'd prefer you not mention):
-Um. Inconsistency in Feddy's fingers. I noticed they get thicker or... something. Will most likely alter.

-Also... panels 3-4. Didn't quiiite come out how I intended. AlfaShampoo-Artemis said it looked like Kailani was staring at his biceps PFFF

Constructive Criticism, pointing out flaws, and spelling/grammatical help is DEFINITELY helpful!

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awesomefox02's avatar
Oh dear god 🌟. Is she going to be ok now she meet her mate 🌸?