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I'm sorry again for the lateness. But I'm not going to give any excuse as I don't really think there's a need to. I am sorry I wasn't able to get a page out once-a-week for this month, but hey, I nearly made it! I'll try to make the next page next week but after that the old schedule returns.
HEY LOOK THERE'S SOME FEDDY COLORS THERE OMG
I am fond of most of this page, actually. The only thing I don't favor the least is panel 5 (the boots). Ugh, could not get that perspective at all accurate. If anyone could, I'd appreciate any redlines possible on it. But only redlines. I highly doubt I'll be able to fix it by a description alone. Many thanks in advance to anyone who could help!
Kailani needs to freakin' stop being emo and SUCK IT UP.
Gawd.
Pssst, by the way, TheDarkestPrince and I have a little surprise to tell you next page. Oh-hurhur *wink*
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Favorite panel: Last
Least Favorite panel: 5
Personal Crits (ones I'd prefer you not mention):
-Perspectives. ;o;
Constructive Criticism, pointing out flaws, and spelling/grammatical help is DEFINITELY helpful!
Copyright © C. "Filly" Boone, AlfaFilly
Do not alter or distribute without permission.
Previous page: alfafilly.deviantart.com/art/T…
First page: alfafilly.deviantart.com/art/T…
I'm sorry again for the lateness. But I'm not going to give any excuse as I don't really think there's a need to. I am sorry I wasn't able to get a page out once-a-week for this month, but hey, I nearly made it! I'll try to make the next page next week but after that the old schedule returns.
HEY LOOK THERE'S SOME FEDDY COLORS THERE OMG
I am fond of most of this page, actually. The only thing I don't favor the least is panel 5 (the boots). Ugh, could not get that perspective at all accurate. If anyone could, I'd appreciate any redlines possible on it. But only redlines. I highly doubt I'll be able to fix it by a description alone. Many thanks in advance to anyone who could help!
Kailani needs to freakin' stop being emo and SUCK IT UP.
Gawd.
Pssst, by the way, TheDarkestPrince and I have a little surprise to tell you next page. Oh-hurhur *wink*
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Favorite panel: Last
Least Favorite panel: 5
Personal Crits (ones I'd prefer you not mention):
-Perspectives. ;o;
Constructive Criticism, pointing out flaws, and spelling/grammatical help is DEFINITELY helpful!
Copyright © C. "Filly" Boone, AlfaFilly
Do not alter or distribute without permission.
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