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Wee! At long last!
I actually still have to finish a few things up on this page (such as adding the pattern to Matieka's dress since the brushes are on a different computer, and adding some missed highlights and whatnot) but I don't want to get further behind on this, so I decided to post anyway! Will fix up things tomorrow or so~
Silly Feddy, it's not wise to insult the figurehead of an entire planet. No matter how insulting she may be.
So this page and the next few of this scene have been bouncing around repeatedly in my head during my editing. I reworked the dialogue I don't know how many times and changed the scenes up entirely more than enough. In the end, even if I still feel a bit of things are still too "Show, don't Tell" perhaps, I just stuck with the scene. Because if I keep lingering on it I'm never going to make progress. Live and learn. You'll likely still enjoy it anyway, despite the errors. C:
Feddy and the queen have quite an interesting relationship, don't they? :D
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Favorite panel: 1
Least Favorite panel: 4
Personal Crits (ones I'd prefer you not mention):
-Some current obvious incompleteness
-Slight oldness of artwork (in some anatomy especially, but if you see something off feel free to mention it anyway, but I might already know about it)
Constructive Criticism and spelling/grammatical help is WELCOMED!
Copyright © C. "Filly" Boone, AlfaFilly
Do not alter or distribute without permission.
Previous page: [link]
Prologue: [link]
Chapter 1: [link]
FAQ: [link]
Wee! At long last!
I actually still have to finish a few things up on this page (such as adding the pattern to Matieka's dress since the brushes are on a different computer, and adding some missed highlights and whatnot) but I don't want to get further behind on this, so I decided to post anyway! Will fix up things tomorrow or so~
Silly Feddy, it's not wise to insult the figurehead of an entire planet. No matter how insulting she may be.
So this page and the next few of this scene have been bouncing around repeatedly in my head during my editing. I reworked the dialogue I don't know how many times and changed the scenes up entirely more than enough. In the end, even if I still feel a bit of things are still too "Show, don't Tell" perhaps, I just stuck with the scene. Because if I keep lingering on it I'm never going to make progress. Live and learn. You'll likely still enjoy it anyway, despite the errors. C:
Feddy and the queen have quite an interesting relationship, don't they? :D
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Favorite panel: 1 Least Favorite panel: 4Personal Crits (ones I'd prefer you not mention): -Some current obvious incompleteness
-Slight oldness of artwork (in some anatomy especially, but if you see something off feel free to mention it anyway, but I might already know about it)
Constructive Criticism and spelling/grammatical help is WELCOMED!
Copyright © C. "Filly" Boone, AlfaFilly
Do not alter or distribute without permission.
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As I read this again, I noticed something about the queen that has bothered me. She has a lot of features that remind me of a rat except for the lack of a rat's incisors. Is that intentional?